看到很多朋友都在犯愁给签证官的信,我把我写的贴上来做个参考吧,个人觉得只要是说清楚了,不用特别在意语法啊之类的问题,毕竟用英文写也只是为了表达一个诚意,咱这些毕业之后除了看美剧就没碰过英语的业余人士对自己要求就不要太高啦(自我安慰……)!求专业人士轻拍!
AustraliaEmbassy Chengdu Office, To whom it may concern, Dear Sir/Madam, Annual travelling is a big event for us since we got married in 2012. We went to Sanya in 2013, Japan in 2014, Mauritius in 2015, and we would like to go to Australia this year!(突出过往出国旅行经历) Our plan is to set off to Australia on 23th Sep 2016, and come back on 7th Oct 2016. Both of us have got an approval for a vacation from our employers. Flight tickets (already paid) and certification letters are attached for any details.(单位准假很重要) We have been living in Chengdu for 13 years since we went to university in 2003. We love this city so we decided to work here after graduation in 2010. XX (the husband) has been worked as an engineer in XX research institution for 6 years. As you know, working in a research institution in China is stable and with a good prospect. And YY (the wife) has been worked in the position of manager in YY which is the second largest YY of China for nearly 4 years. (以上均为了强调居住和工作的稳定性)XX’s salary is RMB XX before taxation per year, and YY’s basic salary is RMB YY, together with bonus and benefits for about RMB YY before taxation per year. It can be confirmed according to the bank records and taxation payment records. Through our hard work, we now own two estates, which are worth about RMB ZZ, and a car which is worth about RMB ZZ. For confirmation, property ownership certificate, purchase receipt and contract, vehicle ownership certificate are attached. Most of all, our parents and grandparents all live in China, with the work, income and properties information we mentioned above, we just try to demonstrate that we are able to afford this travelling and we will definitely come back to China on time.(这几段都是在讲财力情况,反正中心思想就是我们可以负担自己的旅行费用,按期归国,一定不给澳洲人民添麻烦) If our visa applications get approved, we would like to spend 4 days having a city sightseeing in both Melbourne and Sydney, 3 days driving along the Great Ocean Road (we got right-hand driving experience in Mauritius) to watch wild koala, Otwaylight house, the Twelve Apostles, Gibson Steps, London Bridge and etc., and 4 days visiting Bruny Island, Wineglass Bay, Cradle Mountain in Tasmania. Particularly,we are looking forward to tasting the lobster in Stanley! Detailed travel itinerary, including accommodation and domestic flight booking information, is attached.(旅行计划,显得签证目的可信) Besides,it makes our overseas trip much easier that we are able to communicate in English.(还是在讲不给澳洲人民添麻烦) Thank you for your time and kindly consideration. Yours sincerely (手写签名,以示真诚)
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