给一签悲剧准备二签的朋友们, 哈哈,先深呼吸一下。。。。。 首先,摆正心态。不要轻易觉得自己的条件不好,也不要埋怨签证官的决定,他给你的拒签理由,是你二签的指导方针!要感谢他在那么忙的工作中,还给你指出你的不合适的地方!
二签时的说明信呢,我觉得还是写写比较好,可以让签证官直接的了解你,评估你。我看了论坛里二签的说明信,总结了一个自我感觉比较有逻辑感的格式。
第一部分:写被第一个签证官拒绝的理由+自我检讨 第二部分:根据拒签信的理由,逐条写出你的措施和新提交的支持性材料 一般:回国约束力不强——除了加钱之外,再多提一提家庭! 工作不稳,财力不够——强烈表示你很爱自己的工作 怀疑出国的真实意愿——明确的写出为嘛一定要去那
儿。。。。。。 第三部分:再次保证自己有钱,有能力去玩,而且一定会回来!
下面是我帮我的朋友写的一封说明信(里面有语法错误,欢迎指正,我的邮箱:missmystery2012@sina.cn )
Dear sir/madam, I am the applicant xx. I was very disappointed when I knew that my tourist visa application was denied, because I have been preparing for it for a long time. But when I read carefully the rejection letter by Jane(签证官的名字 ),I realize I have a lot of points to improve. First, my material can not well explain to Jane about my financial , employment status .Secondly, no sufficient evidence to prove that i have strong ties of coming back China . And thirdly , no indication that you have previously travelled outside of . Thus there is no evidence to demonstrate a history of abiding by the conditions of prior visas and departing other countries within visa validity.
I think regarding the concerns of Jane, I can offer more complete material to prove that I can well accomplish the journey.
For my job, i think i should say something about my company first .
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(因为朋友公司小,注资少,这部分基本是按照他们公司宣传的翻译的)
I’ve worked in this company for almost 3 years , and now become sales executive , I love my company, and i do enjoy this job !
For my salary , i have basic CNY 10000 salary plus some push money . xxxxx(有发现的,可以说明一下工资发现,薪水不高的可以让父母资助)
For my family , My father xxxxxxxxxxx, My mother xxxxxxxxxxxxx,
I do really love my family ,though we couldn’t
see
each others very often. my father and mother are old now , as their eldest daughter, I have more responsibility and obligation to take care of them, and i really do want to do so . i go home to visit my parents once i have time .
And for me , I love traveling , and My lovely friends, colleagues , they are all in China , and i will never leave them behind or live a life without them . Meanwhile last month, I have just renewed my Fitness center membership card , which has not yet begun to use . I enclosed some photos at the end of the letter . I will surely come back to China!!!!!!
Why i choose Australia as my first TRULY overseas country( actually , i’ve been to HK for many times since 2004 ) , because i’ve heared from my friends about its blue sky, white clouds, and beautiful milk way in the night sky for many times , and want to see its beauty by my own eyes ,
and also plan to try snorkeling at the reef. And im sure with my travel sprite and passion it will be a good journey to look forward to
meanwhile , once again, i promise to return to China on time .
I sincerely wish you can reconsider my application and give me the chance to visit Australia, the beautiful and magic place!
Best Regard xxxx |